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Text & Audio Battles Worlds most dangerous rap battles go down here!

Battle Results: Who do you think should be the winner of this battle?
INTL P 2 100.00%
Yung BIG 0 0%
Voters: 2. You may not vote on this poll

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Old 10-19-2008, 06:22 AM   #11 (permalink)


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I appreciate that Dope.
I really came hard in this one but that flow thang:
How i could fix it? What i should do? Shorter lines?
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Old 10-19-2008, 06:59 PM   #12 (permalink)


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match up your syllables and use more than one rhyme in a line helps too
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Old 10-23-2008, 09:05 AM   #13 (permalink)


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yea my vote would have to go to intel p too;....too me he just had the better flow;
bigg's was iight but it was just too plain and simple and too straite too the point; you shoulda jus came wit a lil bit more complexity know what im sayin?....but for the most part your flow was coo....but just work on it a lil bit....iight

my vote; intel p !
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Old 10-27-2008, 12:10 PM   #14 (permalink)


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Loved that right there^
Finishing punchlines were great to.
Homie then yo gotta get'cha mind made up and vote
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Old 11-10-2008, 10:08 AM   #15 (permalink)


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