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Old 10-31-2008, 11:41 PM   #1 (permalink)


Default a verse i wrote iin prison

just got this shit in the mail today from my dude in there....he has some of my papers and shit from when i was locked up and he sent me this shit with a letter saying hes feeling the same way

yo fuck all the stress n/ shit/ gettin me depressed/
cause i lost all the love and respect i had left/
im like/ what is life but to live and then death/ but i guess all i got is positive/
to expect next/ cause/ i dont got much/ and everything i gots bad/
but i had everything once/ fuck/ man im mad/ at myself/ cause everybodies gone/
aint no one else to blame/ its a shame/ cause i got stuck in a bunch of fuckin games/
im just lame/ cause im sittin here/ wishin not doin shit and/ i aint gettin no where/
i swear god gotta be kiddin/ shit n everybody turned/ cause i turned into somethin different/
i cant keep a fuckin friend for nothin im fuckin pissed man/ so/
anything i do anymore ima be high/ cause i dont see why i should prolong/ this long life
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Old 11-01-2008, 12:03 AM   #2 (permalink)


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lol young thug lookin at it
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Old 11-01-2008, 07:38 AM   #3 (permalink)


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Thease 'one word rhymes' took some re-reading but it was dope verse tho
Ex:
yo fuck all the stress n/ shit/ gettin me depressed/
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Old 11-02-2008, 08:01 PM   #4 (permalink)


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you can tell thats heart felt
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