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Old 10-29-2008, 06:09 PM   #1 (permalink)


Default some love shit

this shit is a verse i just wrote about my x she was this chick i was livin with for a minute.....it shouldnt come off as bogus but w/e

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her skintone complexion/a reflection/ of coffee with 2 creamers/ she [u]caught me[u] with an erection/ it started with sex un-safe with no protection/ for weeks/ then we both got caught up in the direction/ of tryna be in love/ we loved livin together/ never thought wed end up sick of eachother/ broke up and i dipped out/ now we missin eachother/ but now im kicked out and shes pissed/ shit its whatever/
life sucks/ and yup/ she found somebody else to fuck/ but/ im still in lust with this bitch/ shit im stuck/ shit im fucked/ cause the only thing i wanted was a life/ but i got caught/ and thought that all i wanted was a wife/
so ladies i dont mean to intentionally diss you/ but why you treat us like shit when we affectionately with you
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Old 10-29-2008, 07:39 PM   #2 (permalink)


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good verse fa sho
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Old 10-29-2008, 08:15 PM   #3 (permalink)


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Dope verse man. I can relate
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Old 11-06-2008, 11:37 AM   #4 (permalink)


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dope;...
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