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Old 10-15-2008, 06:50 PM   #1 (permalink)


Default Stuck on Repeat

Quick thing I wrote last lesson
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My desk contains cd covers, my pager
Dirty rubbers and razers
Money for favours
Gum of all flavours
Numbers on papers
Bacco I break up
Weed crumbs from ages
Ago...
Il read you this off my paper yo’
You sing along with the radio
I know you long to be on a TV show
So you can stop selling the blow
And get your chance to blow
No romance just fellatio
Your girl dance just to get some dough
That you plan to spend on dro
You a man who’s plans unfold
According to plan, like you ran the globe
Grands you can afford to throw
Away....
Then you awake...
No weed to get baked.
You need to create
Some type of make, Some type of model
But fuck that cake, go get that bottle
Hit the lotto
Get back to your grotto
Quote that motto
And sleep.... rewind, I don’t mind because your lifes stuck on repeat listen to what I speak its the realest thing you heard in weeks.
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Old 10-16-2008, 08:53 AM   #2 (permalink)


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Thats dope. only disturbing thing was one word lines, they make readin harder. Keep it up.
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Old 10-16-2008, 06:58 PM   #3 (permalink)


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Yeah I was toying around with them a bit. Thanks for the feedback
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Old 10-29-2008, 11:29 AM   #4 (permalink)


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yea...
it was coo...
but samething he said...
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