Just Fixin' Ma Flow (Dissin Ya)

[Frosty Outlaw]

None really liked my songs, lyrics were wack
Now been fixin ma flow, baby im back

So guy who wanna battle me show up now or neva again
Ya suck.... i dont care even ma teacher thinks im insane
This goes fo that bitch but hey im just death penn
Dont got no visa but i can battle ya like any american

Backyard got Yamaha 350R sittin clean
So nigg* show what ya got in gene
Ma new lyrics will get ya quiet like n ice machine
Make em laugh atcha like at Mr. Bean

If ya cant battle ya possibly poor
Ma rhymes leave ya lookin like ya fallen from 3rd floor
Ya can feel like im prowlin in ya backseat like pedophile waitin 'til kid get Sore

Show off now i wanna see where tha spotlight hit
if ya spit ya know Im always betta than ya, just admit it
Ma lyrics make ya feel like ya neck got split
They make ya pray me to stop it
But i wont stop 'til i see ya gettin kicked 2 casket like n stone pit
Fuck wit me and die just live wit it
im from the city where we dont really give a shit

Dont care if ya got killed in lyrics, datz what im into ho
Im sittin on pit ready to go yo
Ya can get killed in 2 bars and so much mo

Challenge me to battle, thro somethin back or just feed.

[Guido]

man your getting better everytime i read your lyrics.
keep it up bro, and continue to do what you do

respect.

[Frosty Outlaw]

Propz. i appreciate dat.

[super!!!]

You keep impressing me with each lyric

[Guido]

yeah man for sure

keep them coming :)

[perico pinero]

no disrespect but too me your whole rhyme scheme is just too plain and simple and to the point, don't get me wrong you iight but you don't say anything that wud make a nigga say wow....tooo me i just think you should add more complexity and rhyme patterns and schemes too your flow...and come with more stinging punches and word's....
not trynna diss you or just down talk yo flow or nothin...im just lettin you know from my perspective of how you rhyming is....that's all...much respect though...keep doin ya thing...you got potential...

[Frosty Outlaw]

Originally Posted by riddlez

no disrespect but too me your whole rhyme scheme is just too plain and simple and to the point, don't get me wrong you iight but you don't say anything that wud make a nigga say wow....tooo me i just think you should add more complexity and rhyme patterns and schemes too your flow...and come with more stinging punches and word's....
not trynna diss you or just down talk yo flow or nothin...im just lettin you know from my perspective of how you rhyming is....that's all...much respect though...keep doin ya thing...you got potential...

Yea...
Thats almost all i can say.
Im tryin to kick thingz better now.