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09-30-2008, 11:57 AM
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| |  THE SONG WHAT I REALLY WANNA HEAR OPINION OF! Nah it aint song its more like long verse what i wrote, feed it! 0-5 it is? Its called Look Around Hip-Hop culture keep dyin' before it used to be about good rhymin' now 50 Cent snitched, he still keep lyin' they used to have hope, rap bout dope Now all they got is soap, theyr flat broke fifty used to have finger on trigga Hes every line ended with nigga Now look at that gold digga He swims in money like Scrooge McDuck he`s locin down with Hummer truck thats every Youngsters dream. When fifty buys new infra-red beam, he needs security team 2 keep rims clean Game published LAX Files I thought hip-hop was saved for while i was wrong, it cant still beat OldSkool time cuz before beats were ill rhymes were intented 2 kill Now all we hear is Wyclef Jean payin' bill And Akon showin' us how 2 chill Before DJs bumped tracks like California Love Now when you go 2 club ya hear ne-yo hes always with a bitch to show of Kill, rape , get money and go to jail thats what rappers before rapped of Now rappas rap of anythin' stupid like theyr new golf glove (startin to quiet down) Just look around you, you will see, see how N.W.A vanish to the history, Baby look around you, you will see, see how hip hop dies in streets
__________________  I've shot down, murdered and seen my Reincarnation, ready to show to guyz that thought i'd never melt to nuttin Last edited by Frosty Outlaw; 10-01-2008 at 06:49 AM. | |
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10-02-2008, 06:14 AM
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| |  your getting better with each song you post up. Id love you hear you on a track, as sometimes your english takes away from the song, allso the way you write it up takes a bit of re-reading to. In no way am I taking a shot at ya, doing well though man. If you have anyway of recording get up on that. Will help push your full potention. Only line I diddnt agree with was the Quote:
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10-02-2008, 09:27 AM
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__________________ I've shot down, murdered and seen my Reincarnation, ready to show to guyz that thought i'd never melt to nuttin Last edited by Frosty Outlaw; 10-02-2008 at 09:40 AM. | |
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10-02-2008, 10:01 AM
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| | yeah I totaly understand that man, thats why I want to hear you on a track because I think that will help with the language. Not that your bad at english at all. But I think you get what im saying :D Overall though, great effort and keep it up | |
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10-02-2008, 10:41 AM
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| | Ye i get, possibly you gon hear me in track also after its ready...
__________________ I've shot down, murdered and seen my Reincarnation, ready to show to guyz that thought i'd never melt to nuttin Last edited by Frosty Outlaw; 10-05-2008 at 03:39 AM. | |
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10-03-2008, 11:36 PM
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Yung i remember helping you out a bit with this and it turned out really well. keep at it
__________________ Brother Ali=Top 10 Ever...and I will argue this!   Join Moola, invite more people Copywrite I feel like I'm the Biggie of my City Get me? You can be Jigga Second in line When I'm Ready to Die Then you can be bigger -------------------------------------------- [Murs] The problem with hiphop? ...shit nothing at all it's an artform that ranges and it changes it evolves it's not always for the better, but patient with it ya'll for our time will come and the wicked will fall The problem with this song, is it's not long enough to say how fucked up it is that we live in this way nothings is alright ...but everything is okay so we plan for tomorrow but we live for today [Slug] The problem with sex is selfrespect - calibration the orgasm serves as your validation... and the problem with love, is that it lives in a book now the problem with drugs is that theyre too fucking good now the problem with logic is theres too many loopholes and the problem with truth is that it's usually brutal the problem is I can't trust most of what I see so Fuck it! ...all the problems of life must be me!  | |
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10-05-2008, 03:39 AM
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Dope, ye it turned to be a nice one... thanks of help!
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